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Kytten
Novel: BattleCry
Genre: Fantasy
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About Kytten

Location: UK

Home Region:
Europe :: England :: Elsewhere

Age:21

Favorite novels: I've read, in my life, thousands of books. I don't think I could choose one.

Favorite writers: Terry Pratchett, Neil Gaiman, Robert Rankin, Tom Holt, Angela Carter, Terri Windling, and so very many more.

Favorite music: The stuff on my MP3 player- ranges from Tori AMos through Enya into Heavy Metal

Non-noveling interests: Music, Clubbing, Roleplaying Games, Yoga, Exercise.

Joined: Oktober 9, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

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Synopsis: BattleCry

Eleanor is ten when the invaders come, driven by their insatiable need for land and resources. Her village tries to stand up to the attack and is destroyed, and Eleanor- along with a number of other children- is taken by the invaders to be brainwashed and trained as soldiers for them. Years later, after hearing rumours about a group of rebels, she struggles free of her conditioning and joins them- with tactical knowledge and valuable experience born of her training. Now she has to persuade the rebel group to trust her, and believe her when she says she knows how to beat the invaders.

All it requires is to risk all their lives to recruit some almost extinct magical races. Easy, right?

Excerpt: BattleCry

Her pack was heavier, heavier than it should have been, but then it was carrying more than she should have been. She glanced back at her platoon, normally she would castigate them for such sloppiness and lack of discipline, but it suited her purposes right now. One young woman- Rhian, or something similar- had unbuttoned the top two buttons of her tunic. Not one of them- apart from her, their leader, of course- was wearing the armour that should have been part of their uniforms. This was an exercise.
As far as they were concerned, this was nothing more than a gentle walk.

They were a new group, inexperienced. She would never get away with this with her old group, but then she'd applied for transfer in order to do this. She swallowed. They were getting close. She felt sick. This could mean her end, as well as theirs.

She had sharpened her weapons last night, sharpened them till they could slide through flesh like butter. Her thumb still throbbed with the evidence.

Whispers and chuckles reached her eyes, and she closed her eyes. Her oldest scar, her first scar, throbbed. One of them laughed outright. Good. The noise should attract attention.

She shifted under her armour, her shoulders were already emitting their faint protests at the unusual weight, and the brief respite was necessary.

"I" her voice was faint the first time, like a boy becoming a man. She swallowed, and tried again.

"I think we should rest here!" she shouted, loud enough to startle the birds from the nearby tree-tops. "Just... just relax, everyone."

They talked, and laughed, slumping sloppily on the ground, sprawling. Nothing more than children, really, only a few years older than when she’d become a soldier… but even then she would never have been this casual.

Eleanor made sure she made as much noise as possible, shouting orders, hearing her voice echo through the trees. Her sharp ears picked up a rustling in the bushes either side of the path. Good.

She stood back and waited.

She didn’t wait long.

The attack was fast, and brutal, and she stood by as the group of wild haired ragged bandits piled in. Her troop fought well, and she slipped into professional detachment, keeping herself out of the thick of the fighting, ensuring her own survival.

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