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teenwriterNJ
Novel: Word to the Skies
Genre: Young Adult & Youth
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About teenwriterNJ

Location: NJ

Home Region:
United States :: New Jersey :: Northeast

Age:16

Website: http://anywherebutup.blogspot.com/

Favorite novels: Tenderness, Rumble Fish, Leaving Paradise, The Outsiders, Eragon, Eldest, Percy Jackson & the Olympians, I Am Mordred, That Was Then This Is Now

Favorite writers: S.E. Hinton, Robert Cormier, Chris Paolini, Rick Riordan, David Klass

Favorite music: Senses Fail, Eminem, Brand New, 2pac, My Chemical Romance, Taking Back Sunday, Saves the Day, 50 cent, Cute Is What We Aim For, Paramore, Lil Wayne, Haste the Day, Weezer, The Killers, Lupe Fiasco, Say Anything, T.I., Sum 41, Kanye West, Green Day, Jimmy Eat World, Hawk Nelson

Non-noveling interests: chillin with friends, music, movies, reading, drawing, writing poetry, playing my guitar, movies

Joined: Juni 25, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:

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Synopsis: Word to the Skies

Alan Shine was only seven when his father walked out on his family. This life-altering event confused Alan. He never completely understood why his father wouldn't come home. He didn't understand why he left in the first place. As far as Alan was concerned, his father seemed happy to be with his family.

But as Alan grows up, he starts to comprehend the difficulty of life and the burdens and opportunities that come with it. And as Alan learns the truth of why his father left him, his sister, and beautiful mother, he is more torn than ever. Now Alan is forced to come to terms with his feelings of hating his father or missing him terribly.

Excerpt: Word to the Skies

One time I was playing basketball with Dusty and my best friend Francis on the hoop attached to the garage door, and I couldn’t seem to get my free-throws right.
“Wow. You suck,” Francis said after I missed on the, like hundredth time.
“I was never this bad before.”
I tried again and missed. Dusty groaned.
“Even your dog thinks you suck.”
“Like you can do any better.”
He stole the ball from me and shot it and made it.
“I suck, too. I guess now you suck more,” he said.
“Don’t you have to go home soon?”
“My mom’s picking me up.”
I shot around long after Francis left, trying to perfect the free-throw shot. It was frustrating. The ball either hit too far to the left or too far to the right. When I tried aiming it perfectly I shot it too hard and it bounced away. When I tried a softer touch it wasn’t enough and just scraped the rim. I tried changing positions and switching my hands. Nothing was working. I got so upset I finally threw the ball against the garage door so hard that it nearly hit Dusty. He yelped.
“Sorry!” I said, aggravated.
I sat on the concrete, exhausted. The ball dribbled down the driveway, but Dusty stopped it before it got into the street and rolled it back to me with his nose.
“Thanks, buddy,” I said and scratched behind his ears. “I don’t know what’s wrong with me, Dusty. I’ve never missed this many free-throws before.”
He barked.
“I guess you wouldn’t have any tips for me, huh?”
He whimpered and rubbed his head against my leg.
“Yeah, I didn’t think so.” I stared at the hoop, imagining a ball swishing through it. “My dad would’ve known how to help me. He would’ve known exactly what my problem is.”
I stood and grabbed the ball. I dribbled it a few times and ran up for a lay-up. It flew through the net.
“I guess that’s enough for now. Let’s get inside, Dusty. It’s getting dark.”

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