Genre: Fantasy
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Brief Author Bio: Im a 18 year old girl that lives home with her mom and dad i have 3 pets named bandit spot and lily i love to be with them they are my world. |
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Synopsis: a murder in the second degree
girl gets abducted and her parents were not looking fior her until she sent home to her parents she is there to help otherr people she is not aloud home to heven until she helps other people.she has a lot of thing that i need to do before i go to heaven.
Excerpt: a murder in the second degree
There was a girl who had her head next to her cut off and was on a stick and the might teens witches had to figure out what happened to her. I was on my way home and I heard some rustling in the bushes and then I saw that it was a bunny rabbit. Then a man stepped out and I screamed and he put his hand over my mouth so no one could hear me scream. Then when he put his hand over my mouth was so no one heard him taking me.
The next couple of day was fuzzy. Little did the guy know I was pregnant but he might have known I was? Then he brought me in to a house but I was blind folded then every thing went blank and I don’t know what was being done I could be getting rapped for all I know. The cops found my body by to the river so all of the evidence was right there next to the river. Then they brought the dogs in to find my belonging that I had when I was abducted. Then they found my bag and in my bag there was a pair of pants that had blood on them and a shirt that also had blood on it. Then they found the murder weapon right next to my body.
There was a print on the murder weapon and they were able to get the guy that killed me. The guy got 20years to life and the next thing I remember is before I went to heaven I had to help this guy that snuck behind his wife’s back and ate some candy and in the candy there were razor blades in the candy he died of bleeding to death because the razorblades got stuck in his throat and he was coughing up blood and was chocking on it and he died that way. When his wife saw him she was screaming and covering her daughters face so that she would not see it. The cops came and closed off the scene so that there was no one else could get in the scene. The cops were investigation the crime and asked where did you get the candy and she told her where she go the candy the next day I was freaked out because I never saw that sorta thing happen before in my life time.☺ The thing was the worst thing that I wanted to see.
I had to help him tell his family that everything is going to be ok. The only way I could do that is if he is willing to let me help him but if he does not then I will be screwed. He should let me help because I will help him go to heaven. The guy had to do a good deed to get to heaven to. The good deed that he had to do is to help his family that it was ok for them to move on. So I had to help him get through to his family. But his family is hard to get through to because they want to remember them the way that he was before he died. But I ended up getting through to them because I sent some signs that he would have sent to them. They accepted that the husband had died and are able to leave him alone. Then he was able to go to heaven with out a problem. I was not able to go there and I don’t know why. I don’t know why Jesus would not let me in I did good deeds and remember when I said that I was pregnant well he did not kill the baby so it was still alive and later died at the hospital I think like I said I don’t know much I am dead. And the deader I got the worse I felt because I could not cross over.
When we investigated the death of Allison who had her head chopped off and was on a stick we almost found the killer but the trail went dry after the fingerprint was not in the database. So we had to go on leads that the people had about the murder. So of the people had good leads but went dry when we investigated them. The next thing happened so quick that the guy had no time to flea the town. We got the tip from his girl friend he had a record of thief’s and burgles then it lead up to murder. He had a silver pickup truck and we put a bolo out on the pickup truck and the next thing he knew was we were arresting him and we charged him with the murder of Alison and he tried to tell me that he was innocent but we new that he was guilty. he tried to tell us what happened but we would not listens him we figured he was guilty so we did not listen to him he tried to tell us what happened that night but we would not hear it.
This is what happened that night I was walking home one night and I saw that there was a man coming out of a bush with blood on his shirt and I asked if he was ok and he told me that he was fine but a girl name Alison was in the bushes and she need to get to a hospital. So I went into the bushes and saw what he was telling me about. I picked her up and I brought her to the hospital and she was pronounced dead at the hospital. You can even ask them if I was there when she was dead. I was innocent I could tell you this over and over and it would not madder how many times I said that I will still be guilty. Then they asked me why was she changed I told them that because she was a blood and I did not want them to know how much blood was lost. But they said that the body was on the bank of a river. But I never knew hat they are talking about. When I told them that they told me that I just became a witness and I would have to talk to a police officer that will do a sketch of what the guy would look like. Then when I told them that they said that he slipped through the cracks of the police station he was the one that they were looking at in the first place. Then they put a bolo out on his pickup truck and he was caught the next day. He was tried as and adult because he was only 17 years old and he was almost an adult. He was the only one that day that saw the girl alone. She was very pretty and if she could come back life she would be disappointed. In what the guy did to her but I think that she is watching. She was the only thing in my life that was good. She was my mother she was a pretty women. She was my mother and if some one takes my sister away for me then there will be trouble. There was a girl who had her head next to her cut off and was on a stick and the might teens witches had to figure out what happened to her. I was on my way home and I heard some rustling in the bushes and then I saw that it was a bunny rabbit. Then a man stepped out and I screamed and he put his hand over my mouth so no one could hear me scream. Then when he put his hand over my mouth was so no one heard him taking me.
The next couple of day was fuzzy. Little did the guy know I was pregnant but he might have known I was? Then he brought me in to a house but I was blind folded then every thing went blank and I don’t know what was being done I could be getting rapped for all I know. The cops found my body by to the river so all of the evidence was right there next to the river. Then they brought the dogs in to find my belonging that I had when I was abducted. Then they found my bag and in my bag there was a pair of pants that had blood on them and a shirt that also had blood on it. Then they found the murder weapon right next to my body.
There was a print on the murder weapon and they were able to get the guy that killed me. The guy got 20years to life and the next thing I remember is before I went to heaven I had to help this guy that snuck behind his wife’s back and ate some candy and in the candy there were razor blades in the candy he died of bleeding to death because the razorblades got stuck in his throat and he was coughing up blood and was chocking on it and he died that way. When his wife saw him she was screaming and covering her daughters face so that she would not see it. The cops came and closed off the scene so that there was no one else could get in the scene. The cops were investigation the crime and asked where did you get the candy and she told her where she go the candy the next day I was freaked out because I never saw that sorta thing happen before in my life time.☺ The thing was the worst thing that I wanted to see.
I had to help him tell his family that everything is going to be ok. The only way I could do that is if he is willing to let me help him but if he does not then I will be screwed. He should let me help because I will help him go to heaven. The guy had to do a good deed to get to heaven to. The good deed that he had to do is to help his family that it was ok for them to move on. So I had to help him get through to his family. But his family is hard to get through to because they want to remember them the way that he was before he died. But I ended up getting through to them because I sent some signs that he would have sent to them. They accepted that the husband had died and are able to leave him alone. Then he was able to go to heaven with out a problem. I was not able to go there and I don’t know why. I don’t know why Jesus would not let me in I did good deeds and remember when I said that I was pregnant well he did not kill the baby so it was still alive and later died at the hospital I think like I said I don’t know much I am dead. And the deader I got the worse I felt because I could not cross over.
When we investigated the death of Allison who had her head chopped off and was on a stick we almost found the killer but the trail went dry after the fingerprint was not in the database. So we had to go on leads that the people had about the murder. So of the people had good leads but went dry when we investigated them. The next thing happened so quick that the guy had no time to flea the town. We got the tip from his girl friend he had a record of thief’s and burgles then it lead up to murder. He had a silver pickup truck and we put a bolo out on the pickup truck and the next thing he knew was we were arresting him and we charged him with the murder of Alison and he tried to tell me that he was innocent but we new that he was guilty. he tried to tell us what happened but we would not listens him we figured he was guilty so we did not listen to him he tried to tell us what happened that night but we would not hear it.
This is what happened that night I was walking home one night and I saw that there was a man coming out of a bush with blood on his shirt and I asked if he was ok and he told me that he was fine but a girl name Alison was in the bushes and she need to get to a hospital. So I went into the bushes and saw what he was telling me about. I picked her up and I brought her to the hospital and she was pronounced dead at the hospital. You can even ask them if I was there when she was dead. I was innocent I could tell you this over and over and it would not madder how many times I said that I will still be guilty. Then they asked me why was she changed I told them that because she was a blood and I did not want them to know how much blood was lost. But they said that the body was on the bank of a river. But I never knew hat they are talking about. When I told them that they told me that I just became a witness and I would have to talk to a police officer that will do a sketch of what the guy would look like. Then when I told them that they said that he slipped through the cracks of the police station he was the one that they were looking at in the first place. Then they put a bolo out on his pickup truck and he was caught the next day. He was tried as and adult because he was only 17 years old and he was almost an adult. He was the only one that day that saw the girl alone. She was very pretty and if she could come back life she would be disappointed. In what the guy did to her but I think that she is watching. She was the only thing in my life that was good. She was my mother she was a pretty women. She was my mother and if some one takes my sister away for me then there will be trouble. Dates of activates
December 15, 2008
Board of education meeting at 6:45 am
December 18, 2008
Booster club meeting at 7 pm
December 19, 2008
Half day
Holiday Assembly
December 22-January 2
Holiday Recess
January 15, 2008
Booster club meeting 7pm
Deadline for high school yearbook orders
January 19, 2008
Martin Luther King Jr. Day
January 22, 2008
Midterm Exam
January 23, 2008
Midterm Exam
February 5, 2008
Report card mailed
February 12, 2008
Booster Club meeting 7 pm
February 16-20
Winter break
Start All Over lyrics
I have to wonder if this wave's too big to ride
Commit or not commit in such a crazy tide
It's sooner than I thought but you called me out
I've lost control and there's no doubt
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
Out of the fire and into the fire again
You make me want to forget
And start all over
Here I come straight out of my mind or worse
Another chance to get burned
And start all over
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
Fantastic and romantic all a big surprise
You've got the warning hesitation pushed aside
It's sooner than i want but you caught my heart
I guess I'm ready now to start
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS x2]
We were both young when I first saw you.
I close my eyes and the flashback starts:
I'm standing there on a balcony in summer air.
See the lights, see the party, the ball gowns.
See you make your way through the crowd
and say hello;
Little did I know
That you were Romeo; you were throwing pebbles,
And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet."
And I was crying on the staircase,
begging you, 'Please, don't go.'"
And I said,
"Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'"
So I sneak out to the garden to see you.
We keep quiet 'cause we're dead if they knew.
So close your eyes; escape this town for a little while.
'Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter,
And my daddy said "Stay away from Juliet,"
But you were everything to me; I was begging you, 'Please, don't go,'"
And I said,
"Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'
Romeo save me - they're tryin' to tell me how to feel;
This love is difficult, but it's so real.
Don't be afraid; we'll make it out of this mess.
It's a love story - baby just say "Yes.'"
Oh.
I got tired of waiting,
Wondering if you were ever comin' around.
My faith in you was fading
When I met you on the outskirts of town,
And I said,
"Romeo save me - I've been feeling so alone.
I keep waiting for you but you never come.
Is this in my head? I don't know what to think-"
He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said,
"Marry me, Juliet - you'll never have to be alone.
I love you and that's all I really know.
I talked to your dad - go pick out a white dress;
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'"
Oh, oh.
We were both young when I first saw you...
Start All Over lyrics
I have to wonder if this wave's too big to ride
Commit or not commit in such a crazy tide
It's sooner than I thought but you called me out
I've lost control and there's no doubt
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
Out of the fire and into the fire again
You make me want to forget
And start all over
Here I come straight out of my mind or worse
Another chance to get burned
And start all over
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
Fantastic and romantic all a big surprise
You've got the warning hesitation pushed aside
It's sooner than i want but you caught my heart
I guess I'm ready now to start
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS]
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
You disrupt me
Can't complain
It's so easy
I'm gonna start all over
[CHORUS x2]
We were both young when I first saw you.
I close my eyes and the flashback starts:
I'm standing there on a balcony in summer air.
See the lights, see the party, the ball gowns.
See you make your way through the crowd
and say hello;
Little did I know
That you were Romeo; you were throwing pebbles,
And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet."
And I was crying on the staircase,
begging you, 'Please, don't go.'"
And I said,
"Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'"
So I sneak out to the garden to see you.
We keep quiet 'cause we're dead if they knew.
So close your eyes; escape this town for a little while.
'Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter,
And my daddy said "Stay away from Juliet,"
But you were everything to me; I was begging you, 'Please, don't go,'"
And I said,
"Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'
Romeo save me - they're tryin' to tell me how to feel;
This love is difficult, but it's so real.
Don't be afraid; we'll make it out of this mess.
It's a love story - baby just say "Yes.'"
Oh.
I got tired of waiting,
Wondering if you were ever comin' around.
My faith in you was fading
When I met you on the outskirts of town,
And I said,
"Romeo save me - I've been feeling so alone.
I keep waiting for you but you never come.
Is this in my head? I don't know what to think-"
He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said,
"Marry me, Juliet - you'll never have to be alone.
I love you and that's all I really know.
I talked to your dad - go pick out a white dress;
It's a love story - baby just say 'Yes.'"
Oh, oh.
We were both young when I first saw you...


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