Genre: Adventure
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Synopsis: Paintball war.
A long time ago, kids got so tired of they’re parents that they moved away. They went to a continent and made it their own. They actually did well, growing food, building home, and expanding. Even though everyone was happy crime still was a problem for the new world. After two months of not knowing what to do about the crime it was decided that if someone was shot with a paintball gun they would have to leave and go back to their parents. Paintballs became more deadly than bullets. People were afraid to go back. Then the first war began between the United Paint Nation and the Paint Dynasty. The Untied Paint Nation was a lawful country full of crime and wealth. Government was controlled by generals or people who were wiser than the rest. The Paint Dynasty was a country full of martial artists and was led, at the time, by Emperor Rai.
Tension between the two countries was immense. The war finally broke out when a paintball ninja, a soldier of the Paint Dynast, ‘accidentally’ shot a paint soldier, a soldier of the UPN. Later known as, Battle at Waltz would mark the first battle in the first war ever in the Continent of Paint. Two years deeper into the war Emperor Rai was tagged in the Battle for Area 12. A stray paintball hit the emperor in the chest and the emperor’s successor soon took over. After another three years of fighting the end was finally in sight. Finally, the emperor surrendered and the UPN withdrew their troops.
Now the UPN faces new danger and Officer Nathan, yours truly, is stuck in the middle of it with his loving girlfriend, Shelby, bestfreind, Drake and not so tough Boss. WIll I survive or will I be tagged trying?
Excerpt: Paintball war.
“P.J. said thanks for bringing him,” Leslie said when I walked in. Sebastion, my brother, was playing video games, Leslie was eating pie and Drake was finishing off all the extras in the left over bottles.
“That’s nasty, Drake.” I said taking an unopened bottle of root beer.
“Surprisingly, nothing broke,” Leslie said taking a bite of pie.
“Wow, I feel lucky,” I said. BANG! BANG! Two paintballs went through my window and hit my brother in the arm. Drake was now freaking out, Sebastion twitching on the ground, LESLIE STILL EATING PIE! I stepped out side and BANG! A paintball whizzed by my head. BANG! BANG! I shot at the shooter, but missed horribly. He was now on top of the ladder in my pool and BANG! BANG! BANG! Three paintballs hit near my feet.
BANG! BANG! Out of nowhere, Sebastion shot him into the pool, the water turning red from the red paintballs. “I think someone wants me tagged,” I said as Leslie and P.J. walked up. I called Jones, who was with a girl from the office at the time.
“Jones, you’re never going to believe this!” I said when he picked up.
“You and Shelby are going out?”
“No, someone wants me tagged,” I said looking at the body.
“Who?!” he asked.
“A paintball ninja!” I said a little shaky.
“I’m on my way,” he said hanging up.
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