Title: Chief Joseph
Length, Draft and Language: 50k, 1st, English
Summary:
Joseph just wants to get away from everything. None of it's bad. It's just not what he wants, not right now. He decides to head up to Oregon to learn a little bit about his Indian heritage.
So here's to running away and the adventures, experiences, and - above all - stories that it brings.
Sub Genre / Keywords: Running Away, American Indian, Coming of Age, Post-Modern
Known Issues: Many but would rather you told me. Feel free to skip chapter 4, It's rather out of place right now.
Critique Requested: What if any is salvageable? (the more specific the better but everything is welcome).
Critique Tolerance: It's ok to make me cry.
Experience & Goals: First novel length story. Goal is to become a better writer and tell a good story.
Method of Communication: redjives@gmail.com
Disclaimers: F* used sparsely. Nothing remotely graphic.
Thank you!
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Dec 3, 2008 - 00 41
I meant to add that I am happy to swap as well.
Cheers.