First I wanna say Its not finished .. Im prob going to edit a lot and also adjust the lecturing etc.. its just a draft thank you!
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Dec 1, 2008 - 16 05
Could you please review the guidelines stickied at the top of this forum, please? The more information you can provide, the more likely you are to find someone to read, and give you the sort of critique you're looking for. Filling out the questionnaire will help potential readers know what kind of story it is, and what kind of critique you're looking for.
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