Hey if you would please click on the name above you can take a look at the prologue for my story. I would love to hear what all of the Nano's out there think!
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Hey if you would please click on the name above you can take a look at the prologue for my story. I would love to hear what all of the Nano's out there think!
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Summary- "The truth. It is a beautiful and terrible thing, and must therefore be treated with great caution."
J. K. Rowling
Marc was just a normal boy (although picked on by many). There was nothing to suggest that he was special at all. His life, however, completely changes when his parents are mysteriously killed. As he becomes older, he sets out to find answers. His travels take him to parts known and unknown.What he finds, however, is something that will change him, and mankind, forever. Book 1
This is my first and I am looking to get it published, so I would love to hear any thoughts on the story so far. I am willing to accept any critique, so review away!
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