I'd like to have a swap with anyone who'd like to:
'Spark'
55,601 (but I'd like it if critiqued in chapters), First draft, English
Spark
Lauren is scarred from a terrible event that happened almost a year ago. she has trouble dealing with life on a daily basis and her old friends have been turning against her. she has anger problems. She wishes that things could just go back to normal and doesn't know what to think. That one day in Blake's room she'll never forget, especially the spark. (Is that a lame summary or what?!)
Sub Genre & Keywords - super powers, popular girls, present time, finding yourself, defiant teen, unsure, love
Known Issues - I think I have problems with really defining my main charecter and getting her to seem realistic.
Critique Requested -
-Is the main character realistic?
-Do I use good surronding description?
-How cheesy is it? (I know it's really cheesy already)
-How believeable is it?
And anything other critiquing you'll give me!
Critique Tolerance - I'm okay with anything as long as you don't flat out say "This is HORRIBLE".
Experience & Goals - This is my first novel, so I want to know how I'm doing. I'd looooove to publish but I think it has a lot of problems to do so.
Method of Communication - my e-mail is 'thejazroom@gmail.com' and I'd be okay with imming.
Anything else? I have no deadline but I'd like the hear back ASAP. and there's nothing really graphic.
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